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lay my skeleton to rest in a grave dug so long ago,
the sides are rough and caving in at parts,

i'll carve stories into the gravestone to give me better memories.

bitterness swirls in my sweat,   please don't let me go,
i'm confused by such intense swinging:
from feet-punching-the-clouds high right down to
clutching hands and desperate tears and an urge to slice so overwhelming,

i shake with my inability.

pass me my flimsy little blades from your locked drawer,
i don't want to start reaching for the kitchen knives.
(this is all i can spit out right now)
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TwilightPoetess Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
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Thank you very much. (:
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You're welcome!
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Hello!
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Thank you very much. (:
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cristinewakesuphappy Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
another good writing from you. :bow:
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Thank you. (:
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